Shikashi Yubi - 12th Division Captain (head of the institute of research and development) [APPROVED]

Character

Name: Shikashi Yubi
Nickname: Shiki, Braniac, The count of the Gotei 13
Age (Appearance/Actual): 24/539
Birth Date: 1-3-1473 (1st of March)
Gender: Male
Non-Zanpakutō Weapon(s): smoke bombs, taser, biological augmentations. Specifically, he has two extremely sharp teeth in his mouth, giving him the impression of being a vampire.
Personality:
Shiki is well known amongst his squad for flirting with anyone, man or woman, who he runs into off-duty. Although he has rarely stooped as low as sleeping with his own subordinates, he'll still wink cheekily at them and has been known to have a lot of fans among the ladies of the lower squad. He manages to pull off a charming Mr. Nice-guy appearance in public, but behind closed doors he turns into a sadist.


One of the main reasons he agreed to take the job was because he loved every last bit of it. From the analyzing new ways to fight, to learning new things almost every day, to having the power to command hundreds of geniuses to do his bidding. But there was always one thing that he loved most of all. In his position, he was able to do huge amounts of dissections of new enemies. He makes sure to be one of the first ones whenever cutting open a new enemy for the first time. It always makes him smile to get a scalpel and start slitting open the stomach of the corpse.


Although his body moves as fast as everyone else's, his mind is renowned for moving a million miles a minute. He has the strangest ability to have around 200 separate ideas flowing through his head at the same time, whilst giving equal attention to them all. He speaks equally fast, jumping from one idea from another without giving anyone else an opportunity to jump in unless they either butt in or wait for him to finish.

Likes:
Sweet food - Shiki has one of the most addictive sweet tooths in the Seireitei. If anyone else ate as much sweet food as he does, they'd surely get fat. However, he's still normal weight. He claims that his metabolism is so fast because his brain is super active.
Waltz/ Ballroom - Whilst Shiki was alive, he had been rather the Casanova. As such, he had learned to dance very well and became a rather large fan of it, this infatuation carried on into the afterlife
Dissection - This has already been covered

Dislikes:
Brutes - Shiki dislikes people who go overboard and violently attack people without provocation. Not that he really cares what happens to the victims of such people, he just finds it harder to get specimens from a body that's been ripped to shreds
Morons - Shiki sees anyone who refuses to think things through and just jumps into the heat of battle is a moron, and detests them all equally.
Prejudiced People - Racism and speciesism are two massive pet peeves of Shiki. He sees that life should be based on facts and not opinions, and it's a fact that not all Arrancars are out to harm innocents. As long as they aren't hurting others, he has no real qualm with Arrancars. However, if ordered to, he'd still fight them.

Physical Appearance: Shikashi looks like your average adult. Standing at his full height he's just over 6'1'', and is slightly muscled. He wears his black hair plain, letting it finish just before the collar of his neck-piece in his Haori. He wears it open, with a belt of vials resting over one of his shoulders and his tazer sticking out of his pocket. The way it sits, it looks just as much like a normal Haori as it does a lab coat, with a few extra pockets to cope with all of his equipment. His eyes are a dark grey, almost metallic in color. In his haori, he has an extended black neck-covering with a shiny covering.

Spoiler:

Theme Song: Sadistic Vampire - Len Kagamine

Lyrics:

Action theme: Maximize the Hormone - Zetsubou Billy

English Lyrics:

Bio: If he was honest, Shiki would have to admit that he didn't' remember very much before he was 15 years old. All he remembered was that he was an orphan with a strange ability to see these hulking white things. They killed his parents, leaving him in an orphanage until he was 15. It wasn't too bad he supposed, the matron was certainly very nice, and they got on well. Even if the kids were broken, they all seemed more than friendly. Perhaps those who had hit the bottom of the pile didn't want to sink any lower. Still, none of this could make up for the loss of parents. It left a very distinct hole, and Shiki knew. He just knew that it was the hollows fault. He wanted to kill them all, but he wasn't strong enough. All he could hope for was that one day they'd leave him alone completely and he'd never have to worry about being hurt again. However, the longer he stayed in the orphanage, the more and more hollows attacked, killing almost all his friends. With the knowledge that it was his fault, he left on his own and swore never to endanger anyone else.

He trained and decided that, if he had to, he'd fight with his own hands to protect everyone in the world. They were his responsibility and he'd never shirk that kind of thing again. He became strong, learning sword fighting from a local dojo that willingly took him on as a retainer. Sure, they were no longer in the era of samurai and ninjas, but there would always be people who wanted to stay with the old ways. He took to the blade like a master, not because of brute strength but because of the intelligence that he showed on the field. When people with brute strength would try and attack him, he would move fast and make sure they didn't have time to get an attack in. When someone who was fast versed him, he used their own speed against them, forcing them to tire out quickly before dispatching them. If he had had any less honor, he could have gone into assassination. But he knew that wasn't the way, he would never kill people he had no reason to hate just because he had been told to.

For 5 years, he had managed to live and train, getting stronger than even the master of the dojo. With his new found strength, he set out to study the hollows, blade on his back. He knew that the best way to fight an enemy was to understand it, and all he knew was that these things were extremely powerful and a real threat to anyone they turned their attention to. He managed to kill quite a few of them, saving people from the threat and collecting more and more information as he killed more and more. They seemed to evaporate after he killed them, and there would usually be black robed Men and women arriving on the scene after he had finished. They always looked at him with wonder, surprised that a mere human who looked like nothing special would be able to do something like this. At the same time, it wasn't just hollows that he went up against. If he saw people trying to kill others who couldn't protect themselves, he would step in and act as their shield. It was clear that this wasn't popular with various underground organizations, and by the time he was 24 he was a marked man. But this didn't concern Shiki. As he grew older, he became more and more interested by ladies. He taught himself how to dance, and even attended a few dance evenings. He seemed to be a popular hit with the ladies, and was a very good dancer. Better than that, he loved it.

One night, it was dark and wet. The rain pounded over the wet countryside, as he rode through on his horse. In the near distance, he saw a man with a huge axe threatening what looked like a little girl. Riding in the way, Shiki swung his blade, cutting the axeman's arm clean off. He went to help the girl and looked into her eyes for the first time. They seemed older. much older. That was when he felt the pain in his chest. Looking down, he saw a knife sticking out of his chest and, as he staggered back, he fell to the floor and died within minutes.

Waking up, he saw the same black robed man that he'd raced to kill hollows with multiple times, and he was told that he was indeed dead, and that he was going to come to a place called the Soul Society. Shiki nodded and proceeded to get into a respectful kneeling position, thanking the soul reaper for all he had done. that was all he knew before he woke up in the rukon district. It amazed him, and he would often go off exploring new areas and meeting new people that he could analyze. It was there that he first had his taste of sweet food and fell in love instantly. It took around a year for the same Soul reaper who had given him the burial to arrive in the district and demand that he presented himself for the academy. Knowing that he owed this guy a favor for delivering him to the Soul Society, he consented and applied. That was where he met his Zanpakuto Spirit, Ōkami. When he finally passed through the academy, he did it much quicker than most. He had excelled in almost all areas. but his Hakudo, brains and speed blew the teachers away.

Zanpakutō

Zanpakutō spirit: Okami is a dragonequus, the mythological bringer of chaos and disharmony. It's head and neck is like that of a pony, except with razor sharp fangs. One of it's antlers is a moose's antler, the other is like that of a goat. It has two large wings, one like that of a pegasus and the other of a bat. It's torso is of a bear and the tail is of a snake. Each leg is also different, one being a lion's, another being a goat's, the third being an eagle's talon and the fourth being a lizard's clawed talon. It looks like a mix and match of every kind of animal in mythology

Spoiler:

he has a very random personality, and as such Shiki is never quite sure what he's going to do next. One second it's cackling wildly and enjoying itself, the next it's drop-dead furious and demanding that someone's blood be spilled. But through all of his mood-swings, there is one thing it never stops being. Intelligent. It always manages to retain a degree of intelligence and sophistication, talking to him with the honorative "-oni", showing he feels a bond like brotherhood to Shiki. However, they seem to get on brilliantly, with Shiki treating it as his equal. They seem like brothers to the end, even with all their differences.

Inner world: Shiki's inner world is like a hedge-maze with Ōkami always waiting in the center. All along the way inside Ōkami teases Shiki, trying to lead him in the opposite direction. The sky above is pitch black, but it only rains if he's depressed. The lower the walls, the more at ease he feels. If he feels completely relaxed then the walls are only knee-high, giving him an easy view of Ōkami wherever he is. However, it's rare that he gets this relaxed. Dotted around the maze are little prizes from every fight that he's won. Replicas of swords of his fallen enemies, statues of hollows and arrancars that died by his sword, and Ōkami's throne is made out of a statue of the current Gotei 13. Their ranks have changed since he gained Ōkami and so the statues changed too.

Shikai

Shikai name: Okami Otamo
Sealed form: When in sealed form, it appears to be a Kodachi, which is a katana but around half the size. It's 6' long, with a curved handle that looks like antler horn. It's small size makes it much easier to strike with quickly as there is very little wind resistance behind it. The blade itself is clean but a dark grey, matching Ōkami's head, the guard looks like an s coming from both sides.
Shikai: The blade seems to be covered in a black explosion, hiding his entire lower arm in it's explosion of darkness. It gets lighter and lighter as the blade reshapes into a gauntlet that goes from his elbow to his hand, putting blades on each of his fingers, like miniature scalpels on each finger.

There is no guard, and each finger blade is chained to the metallic belt that rests just below the elbow. it's made of a material that looks like platinum, but is much harder. The blades are able to pierce through a hollows mask with a single flick, and a single punch would rip through a hollow's stomach, killing it dead. Underneath the gauntlet it's clear that there's a black cloth that's wrapped from his wrist to the gauntlet, protecting it from getting damaged by having the chain rubbed against it.
Call out phrase: Hunt out prey, Ōkami
Abilities/techniques:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Bankai

Bankai name: Ōkami Konranushi
Bankai description: Shika's lower arms glow a blinding white, carrying up to where the gauntlet pinning plate rests. Finally, after around 5 seconds, he's revealed again, his arm seemingly bare. In reality, his fingers are all coated in a silver metal, each with the nail completely sharp. It works on both of his hands, making each finger as sharp as a knife. a grip from this blade is enough to slice cleanly through someone's head.
Abilities/techniques:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Category Proficiency

Tier:
Total Points: 1P/76P
Physical Offense: weak/weak/weak
Physical Defense: weak/weak/weak
Agility: moderate/moderate/moderate
Reiryoku: moderate/Potent/Potent
Kidō: Moderate/moderate/moderate
Hankou: Feeble/Feeble/Feeble
Mind: Feeble/Feeble/Feeble

Glanced through. Looks good.

Moving through to Try-Outs.

added Bankai and point scheme

Shikai Ability #1: Description: Ōkami draws in the Reiryoku of the opponent with each slice, forcing the opponent to fight at a weaker level than him.

^ so it actually has nothing to do with the opponents offensive power?

"unbelievable speeds" does not exist. We have stat systems for that.
And how much time does the second ability need to charge up? One post, two posts, etc?

You need to be more detailed...

Bankai ability:
"Cut through everything". Not really no. If the opponent has a high Hakudo you can forget your attack. Always keep the weaknesses in mind!

About your stat points.

All your abilities are built up on rei and you only have it at moderate?
Heh... you might want to think that over again... otherwise... well good luck~


Add more details then let me know again.

edited

Sexy. (:

Just state how long that "charge" up takes. Does not have to be detailed, but it should be written down.
Either have it like - 1 post to charge up or at first three posts to charge up and once the opponent has a lot of injuries done by Blood Absorption it only takes one post or... I think you get it. Just to have some value to "charge up time".

Everything else is good as it is. ^^